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H0lyhandgrenade, August 17th, 2007, 4:45 pm

Goodbye, sweet graphite.
The pens never did come. Ah well. I'm on holiday for a week now, so I had to go over this page with pencil so fast that I think I killed it. Accursed postmen! They'd better be here when I come back.

Bart doesn't look too great in the bottom panel. He hasn't slept or freshened up since he left England, hence the facial hair. Sorry to people who don't like the fuzz, but it just happens!

Shit. I just noticed I wrote 'place' too much. I think I'm tired too. Fixed it.

I'd be very pleased to hear what you think.

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H0lyhandgrenade, September 28th, 2007, 8:55 am

There've been a couple of comments about Bart looking rather similar to L on this page... and you're right. He does a bit. I'm nothing if not easily influenced, and after seeing a couple of pictures of L I didn't not realize how much this had affected my artwork. Sorry 'bout that- wasn't intentional.

I've learned my lesson... it hasn't happened again... Please let me be...

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Pisceancrazy, August 17th, 2007, 4:56 pm

I think its very well done for graphite ^_^ <3

Wolfa, August 17th, 2007, 5:05 pm

what's wrong with graphite? I like graphite... though it tends too smudge when i use it, but when anyone askes i say its done on purpose.... ^^

Kai, August 17th, 2007, 5:38 pm

I like his expressons a lot

coolchan, August 17th, 2007, 7:08 pm

Ahahaha. I totally screw up my words when I'm tired too (well, even when I'm not tired, actually >>). It's so annoying. XD

I'm glad you updated. :3 You're graphite work is just as lovely as your inked work imho. :D

Kiddou-chan, August 17th, 2007, 7:39 pm

xD a pencil page, yay. I drew everything in pencil xD and never used a pen for my manga, that's why I love pencil xDDD.
I love Bart's bored face, so cool :x. Your background is really nice O__o

Princess of Donutland, August 17th, 2007, 7:51 pm

I think
that I love him still :3
Though I liked the fuzz on him, I do hope that he doesn't pass out while in a dangerous situation or place x. x;~
have fun at your vacation ^^~

RileyMisaku, August 17th, 2007, 9:06 pm

Looks good to me too.
He does look extremly tired. Better not fall asleep in the vampires home! You never know what just might happen!

Jess, August 17th, 2007, 9:43 pm

Honestly this page looks really good ^_^ I love both your penciled and inked work.
Sorry the pens didn't come D:

suicidollxp, August 19th, 2007, 4:21 pm

i like your art so don't worry about it ^_^

Ruthy, August 20th, 2007, 8:12 am

Hurry up back from your holiday!! The suspense is killing me..

XseshiruXairiX, August 21st, 2007, 2:05 am

Even if the pens haven't come, the page still looks wonderful. <3

xkrazydog, August 22nd, 2007, 10:30 am

Im not very fond of BL but the detail in this manga is amazing!! Good job, and I love men with some facial hair *Good going Sven Volfied DX*
Hope your pens come soon. XD And RUN BART! RUN WITH THE BUNNY AND NEVER RETURN! =D

Hyde_n_Psyc, August 23rd, 2007, 1:48 pm

Pens haven't come yet? Man. I have buckets and boxes and oatmeal containers full of nearly every kind of drawing/writing utensile you could find, exepting Copic markers, wich I will eternally lust after on Amazon.com...

This really went by too fast. I'm looking forward to updates.

xhahakristinax, September 2nd, 2007, 1:45 am

I think it looks good in pencil. ._. Um anyway Im faveing this... Cuz Its cute. pecially the bunny. x3 <3

SeaRabbits, September 2nd, 2007, 5:09 am

Maybe it's just me, but I swear in that top panel he kinda reminds me of L...

H0lyhandgrenade, September 2nd, 2007, 10:17 am

Hm... I can kinda see what you mean... I think it's the eyes.


ORIcrimsontide, September 27th, 2007, 8:15 pm

ya now in the 4th panel he looks kinda like L from dn ya now with a shave he would probubl be his twin

MyriamD, October 21st, 2007, 9:10 pm

Yes, second panel, and it's awesome. It's the eyes AND the hair. Also the hand to the chin. Geeze, I'm only on volume five of that... *sigh* Hey, as a joke, can he sit up in a chair hugging his knees? lol

kuroi_hitsuji, September 6th, 2008, 9:27 am

LOL I thought it was a typo at first. XD

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