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H0lyhandgrenade, March 19th, 2008, 6:34 pm

Plug your ears
...Ok. I've held it back for all the previous ones, but I can take it no longer. Please excuse me.

I hate this page D8 I tried to be clever and then it came round to bite me in the ass. Also it took me way too long... I lost passion for it. Is why it looks so half assed. Sorry guys.

Next one might look different. Ooh, that'll be a change...

Btw, did anyone SRSLY trust her when she didnt wake up?

EDIT: I FORGOT THE BLOOD THAT WAS ON BART. *smashes head against desk*




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Nekomata, March 19th, 2008, 6:51 pm


"it doesn't count". Yesh it does. XD
Haha. Awesome,nao.

And it's okay. Some pages do that to ya, they just like to shoot you and ... stuff. Gawd why can't I think of the right words today?
Nao~. Sorry. But this page did turn out nice. ^^


BrittanyBromide, March 19th, 2008, 6:52 pm


haha awww i was tricked i seriously thought she was dead
D:


xkrazydog, March 19th, 2008, 6:53 pm


D8 oh wow, he's fcked right there XD.
>>;; He shoulda tied her up first yep.
And if this is your worst D8 u dun wanna see mine.
<33 Run bart, run and shoot her in the head 8D


Guest, March 19th, 2008, 7:48 pm

Yarg
You have enough talent to be able to draw well, write well, and lay such writings and drawings out in a pleasing fashion. I have none of these talents, so stop being a greedyguts and asking for non-half-assed-ness as well. xD

I'm sure the comic-love will come with time, though. Just let it steadily percolate into you over the days.


BellaMai, March 19th, 2008, 10:01 pm


XD Poor Bart. He tried so hard, too.


H0lyhandgrenade, March 20th, 2008, 5:40 am


Nekomata: Thankyou XD Seems he's in denial. But what can ya do.

BrittanyBromide: Thats ok =D This is just me implementing one of my cheapest tricks as a writer... "Ok, so how could I possibly make this scenario WORSE for them..."

xkrazydog: I keep my worst hidden away in a secret little box that only I have the key to T.T you know that.

Guest: Maybe I am hoping for a lot. But I find that by doing them all in one night in a frenzy I tend to do the best job, because you dont give yourself long enough time to get bored of it. Im off for a couple of days now... I might do that again shortly.

And thanks =D I learnt a new word. Percolate~

BellaMai: It only gets better 8D

Thanks for commenting!


suicidollxp, March 20th, 2008, 7:29 am


oh...O.0? i feel like i'm reading a different story...i mean when you go back to the first page...i also tend to do that, coz i get bored when story goes on and on... when i loss the main points and make too many flashbacks or when bart isn't careful! i really love your style specially the 3rd panel...you'll see one morning when you're sitting in the toilet a genuis idea will come up and the love and passion will burn stronger coz passion never dies, it just get dull ^0^


frozen_shamrocks, March 20th, 2008, 3:51 pm


I can't wait to see the next page.
I sooo want to see his reaction to her possibly not being dead.


lavender_youko, March 20th, 2008, 4:39 pm


Great, now we have crazy not-dead chick in strawberry underwear. XD Entertaining!


Lovova (Guest), March 21st, 2008, 11:28 am


Oh Bart, it does so count -_-;

Yay ^_^ Another page on a beautiful day, could life get any better? Half-assedness? 0.o hmm...I can't tell, but I don't really have an artist eye, so what do I know ^_^? Great job, and good luck to Bart! Happy Easter!


Dyzarktarzk (Guest), March 24th, 2008, 5:40 am


Awesome as always ^_^
But is it me or I prefer the 'thicker' lines? I don't know, but I think (believe maybe?) that it give your story more... how can I say it?
More Bart-sonality?
Either way, it's great!! But who is the girl?
And want to find out what the last paragraph means... *smile*
I love Bart XD

*His t-shirt is a vampire!! That's why the blood got eaten by it XD* Ok... hit me, It's 4:37 am... I'm so sleepy ^^'


Lovova (Guest), March 24th, 2008, 7:36 pm


Me again ^_^ I was relooking at the page (I'm so obsessed with this comic >.<), and I just noticed: are the bullet holes in the girl supposed to be gone? I do recall Bart, shall we say, pumping her full of lead? Is the healing part of her potential vampirism?


H0lyhandgrenade, March 25th, 2008, 12:46 pm


You're not wrong =w= ... Please excuse me on this. You win a penny. They're not meant to be gone, it just escaped my memory to include them. Continuity never being one of my strengths. Good work on the observance tho- I'll be sure to include the bullet holes next time. And his beard. And his blood. And his guns X___x Id forget his head if it werent screwed on.

It makes me happy that you'd notice this tho XD And im glad you like it. Thanks for commenting.


kuroi_hitsuji, September 6th, 2008, 9:44 am


I sorta did..huwoops. XD


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