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H0lyhandgrenade, April 8th, 2008, 8:31 pm

Oh yeah; He is an ass, btw
So yeah... new page. Kinda earlier than usual... and kinda weird lookin' too. Too small, I think. I'll be cutting down on panels in the future.

Finally we see her.
Hope you guys like it.

EDIT: Eh... You're right Noelle =w= I will include the translations. I'm just being miserable not doing. K.. here we go.

"W... where...

Help... me... please...

I want...

I need..."

Abstract, ay? Enjoy~




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H0lyhandgrenade, April 24th, 2008, 2:45 pm


I GOT IT!!!

The end of the guns black from her blood when he shot her earlier!

*punches air*

Eh... tho its still a kinda crap picture.




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Noelle, April 8th, 2008, 8:49 pm


well you could give a one sentance summary of what she says


Pisceancrazy, April 8th, 2008, 8:53 pm


Translation:
"W-where...
Help...me...
I want...
I need..."

HA! And that is what 3 years of german can get you! ^_^


Lancelot was an ASSHAT, April 8th, 2008, 9:07 pm


I kinda feel bad for the girl. -_-;;


H0lyhandgrenade, April 8th, 2008, 9:11 pm


I never said Bart was a nice guy. Or even a good guy.

Btw *applauds to Pisceancrazy* I'm not pretending I wouldn't have known that without the aid of the internet.


Striped Orange Socks, April 8th, 2008, 9:33 pm


Oh, hey, what;s what is that in the seventh panel? I can't tell >_>


H0lyhandgrenade, April 8th, 2008, 9:36 pm


He's pointing his gun at her. It's an odd perspective and its very black =w= Wouldn't have been so bad, but then I remembered his hand was covered in blood and had to colour that black too...

BIG panels from now on. Nice, big, clear panels...


LuluMoon, April 8th, 2008, 10:04 pm


LOVE
I kinda feel sorry for her though. She's like,
"WTF!"
Then gets kicked in the face than probly shot in the face. Double Whammy!

I like the page though. The gun confused me for a sec then I was like, "Ohh.."
Whatever happened to blonde vampire man?


xkrazydog, April 8th, 2008, 10:27 pm


wow D8. Makes me hope that chick eats his intestinal goodies then dance amidst bart's blood as it rains down, but then again he's the so called "hero" in this story. D8

No chivalry right there.


Myryr, April 8th, 2008, 10:31 pm


XD I love her face in the, what, fifth panel?
I need...
*nom nom nom*

PANTS!
...and she actually does need pants. Not that the strawberries aren't pretty.


BrittanyBromide, April 9th, 2008, 12:52 am


ah! thank you for the translations :D
the 3-5 panels look really good :D


Tayday12, April 9th, 2008, 5:41 am

Well. . .
He knows that she couln't POSSIBLY be alive and that goody-goody, considering that he totally shot her to kingdom come.

So at least he's not one of those stupid protagonists that would go all, "Oh, look! A maiden in distress! I think I'll help her! It's great that she isn't a vampire after a--AHHHHH!"
That sort of thing.
;D

I say: Kudos to Bart for being smart! 8D

Edit;
I think I just rhymed D':


suicidollxp, April 9th, 2008, 6:10 am


blast her


lavender_youko, April 9th, 2008, 7:39 am


She's just scared and confused, poor thing. D: Why do people already hate her? ><


Kaja Rainbow, April 9th, 2008, 11:35 am


First off, he knows she's a vampire. We don't yet know what exactly that means in this comic. It might be that it's not possible to be one in this particular setting without massive (deadly) predation. Or he could've just had bad experiences with vampires to make him assume there's no hope for them.

Secondly, it's as you've been saying, she is scared and confused, yes. Inexplicable bloodlust and all. And what that vampire back there said about vampire hunters suggested they tend not to be very reasonable.

So, I kinda see both sides of the issue, really.


'Ryn (Guest), April 9th, 2008, 3:59 pm


Aww...poor little anklebiter...

Now as for the gun, it would probably be clearer if you did something to indicate the existence of the barrel. For one thing, the apparent continuity suggests that he's still facing the window, therefore there's no logical reason for the front of the gun to be that dark (other than dramatic effect, which doesn't really work anyway since I, and apparently a few other people, couldn't tell at first glance that it _was_ a gun)


H0lyhandgrenade, April 9th, 2008, 4:07 pm


I realize I screwed up with the gun. Waay too much black in the wrong place, as you say, as he is indeed still facing the window. Didn't occur to me for some reason. I'll try be a lil less trigger happy with the black next time (Poor gun gag? oh dear...)


Sepapa, April 10th, 2008, 4:52 pm


Awwww, poor her.


Lovova (Guest), April 10th, 2008, 6:23 pm


Gee you guys change sides fast -_-; What she 'needs' and what she 'wants' is probably located somewhere in Bart's viens, no? And we all already knew he was a vampire hunter, meaning he kills vampires, even cute confused ones in strawberry underwere. She already tried to bite off his face in the last page and now she's trying to munch on his legs! I think Bart's perfectly justified here.

...not that the girl isn't -really- cute. Look at those eyes in panel four! Awwww ^_^


Toot, April 12th, 2008, 7:40 am


So glad that I'm from Denmark, 'cus that makes German easier to understand. And I've just been thare, so WOOHOO

But thanks for translating *thumbs up*, You rocked my world! (huh?)


video_gamegurl, April 12th, 2008, 8:11 pm


I am so lost.... I can't seem to follow this comic for crap it makes me feel really stupid.... O well try and try


IkoraChan, April 13th, 2008, 3:58 pm


I wouldn't mind if he got bit, he's kinda mean. hehe.

Actually I feel kina sorry for her, I don't know, she was for certain a nice girl before she was bit by that vampire and got that bad habbit of eating the cute guys when she gets hungry. Am I exaggerating this a lil to much?


ThatDumbSmartChick, April 14th, 2008, 1:35 am


I love the page! She's just so cute munchin' on his ankle! Also, I could totally tell it was a gun.


Roadkill (Guest), June 5th, 2008, 7:40 pm

grammer
The German was all correct except one word. Wollen is conjugated as Ich will, not Ich wille. Other than that, I lovhis comic. Go, go, go! :D


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