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H0lyhandgrenade, June 18th, 2008, 4:24 pm

My mum saw this page I was working on and said... "What on earth is going on." Tch, parents! They just don't understand.......

As wouldn't anyone without having read a few pages back. It does look rather bizarre. Or maybe she was just referring to how camp Bart looks in that second panel. There are manlier ways to dodge, dude. But then again I doubt he's aware he's got an audience.

This was drawn in pencil. Came out looking kinda like pen... I'm suprised. But inking in pencil (OBJECTION! Yes, I'm aware of the contradiction...) takes so much longer. I think I'll go back to pen when I come back.

Hope you like it.

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Striped Orange Socks, June 18th, 2008, 4:34 pm

So /that's/ what he was doing!

Betta run, dude, run! *0*

Crimson_Fire, June 18th, 2008, 4:36 pm

Hehe. She's just all...

"Yaaay blood! *lick*"

xkrazydog, June 18th, 2008, 4:37 pm

She is disturbingly cute in the last panel. Lol. Blood, it tastes just like fruit juice 8D. ~

Wow >w< This page is awesome. So clean and nice.

Vosailyn, June 18th, 2008, 4:43 pm

Lol xDDD Cuuute!! RUN boy RUN!! xDD

Kai, June 18th, 2008, 6:57 pm

Now she looks so cute..

RileyMisaku, June 18th, 2008, 6:59 pm

Hm. I thought that was what he was doing. It's pen? Huh.

Acire07, June 18th, 2008, 11:25 pm

Bart looks REALLY hot in the first panel. I-It had to be said

'Ryn, June 19th, 2008, 3:47 am

Awww, she's such a cute homicidal undead anklebiter.

kirbyboy102, June 19th, 2008, 6:48 am

Run bart, while she's still licking the wall! xD

IkoraChan, June 19th, 2008, 8:36 am

The last panel the girl's so cute. And his face in the 2panel just awesome! Wonder what blood tastes like *taste* Eww... How can she act so calm and happy!?

allyoucaneater, June 19th, 2008, 10:24 am

THE ULTIMATE POWER OF SIDE-STEPPIIIIING! This guy's a total experienced genius :'D

Sepapa, June 19th, 2008, 10:44 am

he's a ninja.

Good page,love!

Sien (Guest), June 19th, 2008, 12:31 pm

Well, that sure makes up for the silly face-wiping in the last page. Great page.

lavender_youko, June 19th, 2008, 7:28 pm

Looks awesome in pencil. Actually, it's awesome either way, you know ~ ^^

He looks all rugged and mahnly in the first panel. :O Very strange!

I second what xkrazydog said - fruiit juice XD

Combeferre (Guest), June 20th, 2008, 3:31 pm

How did I not see that coming? And sidestepping really can save your ass.

BlackFire, June 21st, 2008, 3:27 pm


the_goddess_of_chaos, June 21st, 2008, 10:09 pm

^_^ aww she's so happy licking the blood off the wall

Sien (Guest), June 23rd, 2008, 8:27 am

I just realized this, but... isn't that her own blood she's licking? o_o

H0lyhandgrenade, June 23rd, 2008, 8:54 am

Only a little. It's mostly his. But that makes me realize I made a mistake in that first panel... Y'see, when he got his face smashed into the wall he got a nosebleed and some from his mouth and some from his cheekbone. The good news is... I did my research 8D these places would bleed. The bad news is... I forgot to draw them in on this page. ... Yeah. So next time we see him he'll be covered in cuts that he didn't have here. Phantom injuries...

I always seem to be making these long explanations. Maybe it's a sign that I should just start getting things right instead so I wouldn't have to.

Thanks for commenting!

Lovova (Guest), June 23rd, 2008, 9:22 am

Ha, knew it! ^_^ Like someone said before, that last panel with Strawberry -is- freakishly cute. And where exactly is Bart running to? You're a vampire hunter man! Stay and fight like...well, like a guy trying to beat the crap out of a teenage girl in strawberry underpants!

...Which really doesn't sound as kickass as it is, when you put it like that -_-;

Lovova (Guest), June 23rd, 2008, 9:25 am

P.S. an observation I just made, of the second panel.

Bart now has fins instead of hands. I find this strangely hilarious. I am now picturing him as an otter, with one of those little clown hats, barking and doing the horn beeping trick. This is making me laugh. People are staring at me 0.o'

H0lyhandgrenade, June 23rd, 2008, 9:42 am

Oh, he knows what he's doing. Man or otter, he knows how to do his job.

DW (Guest), June 28th, 2008, 3:51 pm

Oooohhhh!!!*drool* Me like very much... 35 yrs old or not, Bart looks HOT! He's funny too, which is a bonus. Love your comic, your art is in itself magnificent. Your a natural^_~...

wish I could say the same about myself...-_-

White_Riot_ERC, July 21st, 2008, 11:09 am

picasso hands!

oh, he would be proud :)

DarkenCheChan, August 15th, 2008, 9:50 pm

I just have to say this, the last pannel...
Is just to freaking cute!
LOVE the story!

kuroi_hitsuji, September 6th, 2008, 9:53 am

Ahahah!! thats so lol. foolish newborn. xD

NAOMEofthesand, April 5th, 2009, 4:18 pm

Well doesn't she look happy ^-^ XDD

XIchiUchihaSamaX, April 20th, 2009, 6:48 pm

Suuper cute, Ms. Strawberry-undies~

And Bart, being the side stepping ninja he is, is being awesome.

And is that some Phoenix Wright reference I smell in the Artist comments?

Dekka'sAnime, April 26th, 2011, 10:54 pm

lol she gets blood yay shes all
^o^ yay blood *lick*
*he runs off*

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